Good morning Aaron
You are quite insensible
You make bad haiku.
-- Cody (Votes: 5)  |
Mornings are mornings,
Timeless in my tiny world,
My Earth, azure joy.
-- tri tran (Votes: 4) |
Wording of haiku
Poetry without substance
Catches on the air
-- Maq (Votes: 4) |
The path to Heaven,
is paved with spikes and thorns but,
reaching is divine
-- Sean Kay (Votes: 4) |
Outside my window
It is raining all is wet
But not my spirit
-- senryusan (Votes: 1) |
My World Once So dark
Light Has Become Mute, Like Pitch
Impenetrable
-- Abaris (Votes: 0) |
Its fragile grip lost
a leaf drifts gently to earth -
winter calls us home
-- John Behr (Votes: 0) |
Moving reflections
of clouds upon the water
blurred from Gods tears
-- John Behr (Votes: 0) |
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